You are very adept in writing for this genre. The Sondheimesque' style fitted beautifully for this piece. The synthesis of the music and lyrics work seamlessly to the story and drive the narrative along. An example of this is 'Seminal Investments', the musical maturity along with the wit of the lyrics result in a hilarious yet very poignant moment in the piece. It is particularly fast pacing with many twists and turns of the plot...
As you have such a strong base from which to work, go back and look to see where you could tighten the plot... But whilst doing this, you do not need to simplify the musical style. You could even be braver in your musical choices...Please keep working on 'Grace and Favour'. It is a show that deserves with some work to have a commercial life'
Cardiff International Festival of Musical Theatre - Judges at the Global Search For New Musicals (Jul 13, 2006)
On 'Let it Go, Brother' :
excellent song. great simple country gospel melody and a really well written lyric, beautifully focused, straightforward, and poetic. no negatives here at all. this is a really strong song …hey there todd - i really dig this song. i love the lyrical construction, really gives it a traditional folk gospel feel that is refreshing to hear. this is a very contemporary & relevant song that also has a timeless quality to it due to the deft use of traditional styles. everything is working fine here, and i don't have any negatives whatsoever. even in this simple stripped down form the song comes through loud and clear. great job…it is a really terrific song, plain and simple.
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On 'Count the Miles':
Wo, what vivid imagery; certainly helps to paint a colorful picture of the storyline. Again the piano is compelling, and the heartfelt vocal performance is convincing. Todd- I must say that I was rather impressed by your submissions... You have the type of music could could certainly set the tone for a beautiful, lazy Sunday afternoon…Good luck, and I look forward to hearing more from you!
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On 'Sunlight up to the Sky':
this is a really good song. some of the production is cool..like the little counter melodies with the synth. The chorus has an original musical structure and is fresh in where the melody takes the listener. lyrically, it is also less predictable. Good work.
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